The Happiness of a Most Beloved Sister by Mary Smythe. ★★★★★

This variation starts when Elizabeth Bennet is only thirteen. She has always idolised her elder sister Jane, viewing her as the epitome of beauty, gentility and goodness.

When her first suitor proves to be false, Jane is so demonstrably heartbroken that she becomes ill.

This incident has a profound effect on Elizabeth. She doesn't think that she will be able to trust any man and takes it upon herself to protect Jane.

When Netherfield Park is let by the wealthy Charles Bingley, Elizabeth is on her guard. 

Unfortunately, as Charles and Jane spend more time together, Elizabeth's interference is neither welcome nor successful.

Fitzwilliam Darcy is a guest at Netherfield and quickly becomes a friend to Elizabeth. He has a more clear eyed view of Jane and is not impressed. He views her as a fortune hunter and is appalled by her treatment of Elizabeth.

This story features a cold, calculating Jane Bennet. Elizabeth is loyal but naive, while Darcy is supportive, steadfast and swoon worthy. He also gets to deliver a glorious set down!

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